Wednesday 20 April 2016

Castiel's 100 Word Challenge Week #14

   

                                                                           The Box
             The box in the back of the room filled me with interest and intrigued me with every second I spent staring at it. What could possibly be in it? Vast amounts of colourful crustaceans?  A colony of colossal cucumbers? I didn't really know, but I was sure that I had to find out. Anticipation, anxiousness, and excitement all burned inside of me as I sauntered towards the box. I put my hand in the box and felt disappointment crawl up my spine, for in it was nothing but a small thumbtack.  
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4 comments:

  1. Unknown20 April 2016 at 11:49

    I was intrigued by your first couple of sentences to read on! I also like all of the descriptive language you chose to include in your story. I noticed how you added in the little indent at the beginning of your story.

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  2. Unknown20 April 2016 at 11:50

    I was intrigued by your first couple of sentences to read on! I also like all of the descriptive language you chose to include in your story. I noticed how you added in the little indent at the beginning of your story.

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  3. Unknown22 April 2016 at 14:02

    I enjoyed your story ! I loved your descriptive language.

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  4. fluffyrainbowdash24 April 2016 at 17:35

    I liked your story. I liked the build up for the end of the story.

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